Monday, 24 February 2014

[REVIEW] Buried by Matt Shaw


Buried
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Read from February 21 to 23, 2014 - I own a copy, read count: 1




Would my family betray me? Am I worthy enough to be saved? I am scared. Is this really the end of me? But I don't want to die now.

These are the questions that kept playing on Todd's mind. His disorientated mind made him question his parent's love for him and his sister's loyalty to him. He regrets the things he didn't do enough to be loved and cherished by them when he was free and able.

As he lay confined in his small restrictive box, he tried to piece together why is he trapped here. His memories was fragmented and poisoned by wild hallucinations which only thickens the longer he stays in the box. What is true and what is merely his cruel mind playing games with him? Even so, Todd cherished these broken memories however twisted they are as they are his sole companion to get his mind off his suffocating situation.

What I Liked
The author did a great job with the flashbacks. The flashbacks was infused with twisted hallucinations which projects the protagonist's helplessness and the his claustrophobic experience really well. So well that I started having morbid thoughts myself: like keeping a sharp tool hidden on my body just in case what happened to Todd happened to me. This book gives me cold sweat as I do have phobia of being buried alive. Such a sick way to go you know. Worst possible way really. I was all jittery even before I started reading it. I am hopeless I know.

Was I Spooked?
Maybe it's because of me having high expectation before reading it and I was fully expecting to be incapacitated by fear after reading it, that's why I was pretty surprised that this isn't the case for me at all. I am not saying that I wasn't the least affected by the sufferings of the poor guy crammed into a small box. I am, hence the earlier morbid thoughts. It could be that it was told in first person's view and the environment wasn't detailed enough to rub more of the fear factor in or something.

Overview
In terms of plotting, this book nailed it. It kept me speculating throughout the story and I am glad to say I kept getting it wrong. Now that's a good thing especially when it comes to story with a mystery to solve. I also love all the mindfuckings this book dealt me and it is a good read that kept me turning the pages. I just expect a little more on the fear factor. So this is more like a 3.8 rounded up to 4 stars for me.

About the Ending and in Answer to Author's Note
I am much relieved the author didn't go with his initial idea of having a silly ending. The current ending was a good pick as it brought a whole new meaning to the story and includes some moral values as well. I liked the twist where..
Spoiler:
Kayla was actually dead and just a figment of Todd's imagination in his desperation to escape his wretched reality. She is much like a guardian angel eventhough at first I thought she's a vengeful ghost wanting to claim her brother's soul to accompany her in the netherworld. Hey, it's a horror book, one would understandably expect scary stuff like that right? Aside from that Kayla twist, I also think that Todd's grief over her beloved sister's dead leading him to self-destruction habits fits really well with the story and it left a chance of redemption in the eyes of the readers when they eventually found out what actually happened to him at the end of the story.

Yes I liked the current ending although I don't mind...
Spoiler:
a 'darker ending' like the one where the Todd didn't make it. I wouldn't be upset with it - just make it a memorable one is all I ask for. *the dark side of me in control at the moment* This is horror after all so HEA can go fuck itself! When you strike, you strike hard and make it count. I would rather have a memorable ending than one that doesn't fit well with the entire story just because of wanting to conform with the demands of the general request for silver-lining. Just my 2-cents and I am in no way saying the current ending suck kay. It works too.

Side Note
Thanks to this book, little-moth-me have found several films featuring this morbid theme of live burials. I am going to list them here just in case they pique your interest too:

Knowing a curious cat like me, I couldn't say no to these wicked films and will absolutely be watching them slowly. I know that this wouldn't be a good idea to dispel my fear of live burials, I just can't stop myself from wanting to know more. >_<; 


I am reading this book because of this image and its blurb....
The image disturbed me a lot. Yet I couldn't help but to find it mesmerizingly beautiful.
Image Credit: yd84 @ Deviantart.com


BOOK DETAILS:
Title: Buried
Author: Matt Shaw
Publication Date: August 4th, 2012
Publisher: Indie publishing
Type: Short Story, 12,840 words (approximate)
Genre: Horror Mystery Fiction, Psychological Thriller
Tags/Keywords: coffin, buried alive, box, confinement, captivity, claustrophobia, claustrophobic, young man, suffocating, unstable mind, hallucination, cramped, mindfuck

Description:
I've stopped panicking now. Not because I'm not scared. I just know panicking won't help the situation. It'll only serve to make it worse. Need to try and remain calm for as long as possible. Control my breathing. Save my oxygen. I breathed in and coughed. The air in here is stale. I hope I'm not in here for long. Please, dad. Don't let me be here for long. Please. I started to cry. Helpless.

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The day after his 21st Birthday Party, Todd woke to find himself trapped in a box with nothing but broken memories for company. Told through his eyes, live his fear and feel his claustrophobia as he frantically tries to piece together what happened, who buried him and why in Matt Shaw's new horror novella.

Cover Design: Yaryshev Evgeny (www.yd84.deviantart.com)(less)



* Reviewed on February 24th, 2014


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Friday, 21 February 2014

[REVIEW] Cursed Blessings by Lynn Kelling


Cursed Blessings
Recommended for: Mpreg aficionados

Read from February 20 to 21, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Cursed Blessings has full frontal on-page male birth scene in vivid colors. So unlike many other mpreg books that usually safely employs an off-page birth scene (boo). To date I have only read one that has on-page birth scenes (yes in plural) and that was a quirky M/M scifi book called Acquainted with the Night by Tymber Dalton of which I adored to bits as it has everything my deviant little mind could ever ask for - (Check out my checklist here).

The difference between the two is that the birth scenes in Acquainted has an arousing aspect to it unlike this book plus it wasn't anything as intense or graphic as what that poor guy in this book has gone through. The birth here was very traumatic and somewhat gruesome. I really have to salute the protagonist for his balls of steel in his brave attempt to save a life and his remaining male pride knowing the macabre he has to face to achieving his goal. That tub scene is going to stay put in my mind and I shall replay it whenever I felt I need a bit of morbidity in my M/M books.

Nope. This IS NOT an erotica as I don't think what happened is meant to arouse someone unless that someone gets off on morbid stuff. I am not sure what it really is. What I know is that it contains bit of male romance and a shot of the paranormal forces. Whatever it is, I liked it. I liked the author's brave take on mpreg and it is really well written. The pregnancy and birth has a touch of realism in it although it IS an impossible feat for a male's body to perform unless he magically grew a womb, which isn't too far of a stretch here with the presence of paranormal elements in the story. I guess the author pulled it off successfully. I loved it and it left me wanting more.


I love this cover. So daring.

BOOK DETAILS:
Author: Lynn Kelling
Publication Date: December 19th, 2013
Publisher: Fantastic Fiction Publishing
Type: Short Story, 5,300 words (approximate)
Genre: Gay/Bi Mpreg Paranormal Fiction
Tags/Keywords: gay, bisexual, paranormal, mpreg, pregnancy, birthing, birth, home birth, self-mutilation, horror, gore, pain, trauma

Description:
Lev Baxter’s life has been spent searching for the truth of the world’s dark mysteries, and hiding from his own secrets. Burdened by love and lust for his married best friend, Shaw Montgomery, Lev escapes into the arms of countless, unnamed women in foreign lands, far from his true temptation. But Shaw seeks him out and Lev succumbs. The price he pays lies in a Romanian demon’s curse, and his guilt drives him into hiding. When the curse comes to fruition and Lev has no choice but to carve it from his body, no amount of running or hiding can save him from the truths which find him at last. (M/M)


* Reviewed on February 21st, 2014


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Thursday, 20 February 2014

[REVIEW] Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce


Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Recommended for: BDSM fans who loves TPE and tons of hot manhandling.
Read from February 07 to 19, 2014 — read count: 1






If I have a soaking-wet-panties-shelf here on GR, this book would definitely be on it. Therefore 5 Brilliant Lip-Smacking Stars for this high quality collection of BDSM erotica.

It's a must read for all TPE (Total Power Exchange) fans. Especially those who loves good doses of manhandling and masculinity in their BDSM stories.

Contained within its pages are Master/Slave Fantasies that shows us how consensual slavery could be a very fulfilling and erotic experience. Apart from that it also enlightens us on what makes a dom or a sub tick.

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STORY #1:  Collared at the Dog Pound - Sub's POV

An exciting lost-pup-finds-a-master story.
Said pup quickly found himself in a hot mess of pain and pleasure under the firm hands of his new found master. The ending plastered a wide smile on my face.

Story codes/tags: D/S, Dog Slave, Watersports, Rough Sex, Masturbation, Anal Sex, Hot Manhandling, Breathplay

RATING: 4 stars

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 STORY #2:  Hard Day's Reward - Sub's POV

A master kept his slave under stringent orgasm control and denied him release even when he was mercilessly stimulated. The master then rewarded his obedient slave with a fresh juicy boy. It's the best reward for the slave as he used to be a Top before submitting as a full-time slave now. He especially enjoys breaking boys with attitude issue.

This story made me want to crawl into the book to play along with the guys. I wanted to own that juicy ass! It was such a pleasure watching a slave turned into a full-fledged master displaying his prowess at owning a cocky young slave's ass. Expertly turning him into true boymeat, whimpering and begging to be fucked. The boy moans so sweetly and so eagerly it's like music to my ears.

I would give this story a 10 stars if I could. It's one of the hottest story in this sexy anthology.

Story codes/tags: D/S, Anal Sex, Slave vs Slave, Collar & leash, Manhandling, Blowjob, Humiliation-degradation

RATING: 10 rewarding stars

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STORY #3:  Goodnight, My Slaveboys - Dom's POV

A master who owns a total of 5 slaves. Every night he would tenderly tucks each one of his securely bound slaves to bed. They are all perfectly well trained loyal slaveboys who eats cums like ice cream and live to serve.

This story is rather tender and soft. I liked it but it wasn't as hot as the other stories here.

Story codes/tags: Various Bondage, Dog Slave, Handjob, Blowjob, Anal Sex

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #4:  First-Time Slave - Sub's POV

A submissive guy first foray into master/slave relationship. He gets a taste of it at the hands of a non-nonsense master. He was put into strict bondage with a touch of sensory deprivation. Robbed of sight and ability to communicate, the sub found himself at total mercy of his master and loving the mingling of fear and excitement.

The emotions and feelings of the first time slave experiencing his first bondage experience was clearly translated. I appreciate that very much. That hooding scene got me so hot and bothered due the the level of anxiety the new slave exuded. It was electrifying to me.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Hooding, Gag, Chains, D/S, Partial Sensory Deprivation, Anal Sex, Orgasm Denial

RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #5:  The Piss Mummy - Dom's POV

Story number 5 involved a submissive-piss-worshiping-boy and a master who gets off on bestowing his golden streams on deserving boys.

We would get tight bondage and some manhandling and of course jets and jets of warm you-know-what on you-know-where. Basically, there isn't much happening here just someone drowning in piss and some jacking off. Of course if you have golden shower kink, then it's a different thing altogether.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Watersports, Anal Sex, Handjob, Masturbation 

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #6:  Five Bucks a Swat - Sub's POV

MC's master loves tight bubble butts for his spanking kink. Slave boy Spanky is fortunate his prized butt received ample attention from his master. One night master decided to flaunt Spanky's delicious tight buns for the benefit of charity.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Spanking, Handjob

RATING: 3 stars

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 STORY #7:  The Executioner’s Boy (Medieval times) - Sub's POV

A farm boy was obsessed with an executioner and kept going into town just to ogle the man even if it means having to watch the executions of unfortunate souls. The boy was drawn to the power held by the executioner. He was also fascinated with fear itself. He is very much like a fearless little moth fluttering closer and closer to the burning hot flame until self-immolation.

When the boy finally caught the eyes of his idol things took a nasty turn and the boy found himself under the full domination of the man he had worshiped all this while. He was steadily broken down by this demanding man who now selfishly calls himself his master.

This is another story I am happy to give 10 shiny stars. You need dark and gritty in your erotica to enhance your sexual excitement? This is it. This is the story for you. It would drown you in pleasure of total domination over a man and also offer sexual ignition of full submission. The epic twisted love in this one makes me tingle all over. Stockholm was out to play....
The man in the black hood became the focus of my existence. He was my captor, my kidnapper, my king, my god, and my family all at once — the one human being I had contact with and therefore the one on which I lavished all my emotions. I hated him, despised him . . . yet loved him, too.
The Executioner’s Boy has a psychological appeal to it. The reconditioning of the farm boy was fascinating to follow yet quite disturbing to watch. The executioner is an extremely harsh master. Consider yourself warned.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Chastity device, Orgasm denial, Piercings, Rapes, Gangbanging, Blowjob, Flogging, Watersports, Anal Sex, Torture

RATING: 10 friggin stars

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STORY #8:  Fucking Master’s Lover - Sub's POV

Another orgasm denial master who loves to sexually torture his slave boy by fucking and jerking him off constantly but not letting him come. This slave boy is a bit of a switch. He has a dominant side strong enough to top. With balls bursting full of mancream, there's no chance of him ever saying no to a sexy man proffering himself so wantonly even if it was his master's lover. 

This is fucking with the element of danger and guilt. An added thrill to the adulterous, sexually frustrated pair.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Rough Sex, Adultery, Orgasm denial

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #9:  Home-Made Lube - Sub's POV

An on loan slave is about to be stuffed turkey. A meaty foot long sausage stuffed turkey. And it isn't even Thanksgiving yet. Thing is one important ingredient for preparation was missing and the master was getting really annoyed. What would happen to this poor slave?

Uhmm that home-made lube is very organic. But doesn't that defeat the purpose of having the latex on?

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Butt rimming, Handjob, Anal Sex

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #10:  The Horny Houseguest - Sub's POV

Horny dog boy looking forward to being plowed by an equally horny guest with the blessings of his owner. The owner even graciously offered a selective of toys for his guest to play with his dog boy.

I like how pet boy behaves much like a real domesticated doggy. He was frisky and ready to play. Such a lovable pup. I want one.

Story codes/tags: Dog slave, Blowjob, Toys, Sexy manhandling, Bondage, Anal Sex

RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #11:  Isle of Chains (alternate world) - Sub's POV

Conga was on a quest to find and retrieve his best friend Lagan who was missing for half a year already. He felt a mysterious pull from the Isle of Chains a forbidden island where not one returns once they step ashore. Conga was surprised, amazed and shocked by what he found on that island. Will he be able to save his friend and return home safely? Would he want to return now that he had found what he has been missing all these years? Something he didn't know he needed to complete his life with.

The premise of the story was quite interesting and original. The world building was steady and debaucheries of all kinds was found within that mysterious island. Yet I only find this story to be satisfactory but not wow although it does have the most elaborated setup compared with the rest of the stories in this anthology. 

Story codes/tags: D/S, Bondage, Flogging, Watersports, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Fisting, Sex Toys, Orgasm denial, Rough Sex, Rape, Collaring 

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #12:  Fucked by a Stranger - Sub's POV

The MC was a bondage slave and he's very much an exhibitionist. He gets all aroused with others watching him being plowed. While I am aroused watching from the other end.

We get to see slaveboy MC submitting to an anonymous fuck while in full bondage in effort to please his Master. Not much of a submission on his part since he is loving every seconds of it. Hehehe. I liked that the MC puts on a show of defiance for his Master because he knew his Master likes his boy spirited. I have to agree with his Master that a bound, struggling and squirming slave is much more fun to watch than a dead fish.  The MC is such a good boy to try to heighten the pleasure of this voyeuristic Master the best of his ability.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Fingering, Ass playing, Paddling

RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #13:  Two-Slaveboy, Wrap-up - Sub's POV

A story of creative slaveboys mummification. Double the mummy, double the fun. Mummy fucking mummy is hot. 
But when you’re mummified you’re like a shrink-wrapped product on a store shelf — you can’t move except to breathe.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Mummification, Anal Sex, Handjob
RATING: 3.5 stars

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 STORY #14:  Sold to the Highest Bidder - Sub's POV

A very exciting scenario where a slaveboy got himself unceremoniously sold off for pissing off his master by questioning his ownership of him. Looks like he is going to have to learn his lessons the hard way. What went on during the slave processing and auctioning was what gave this story a strong 5 stars! The hot manhandling alone was already the dizzying aspect of this story which I love love to bits! 

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Forced Blowjob, Flogging and Whipping (corporal punishments), Anal Sex, Gangbanging, Rapes, Lots of manhandling, Slave Auction

RATING: 5 Satisfied Stars

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STORY #15:  Master's New Toy - Sub's POV

A 24/7 slaveboy was excited to watch his master train a new boy and was surprised his Master's generosity towards the end. 

Yup, I love this one too. Loving all the hot domination and the total submission by the slave boys was highly arousing. 
Picking the kid up, I slung him over my shoulder. I love carrying guys. Something about the weight of their bodies on me, their submission to me and my will . . . it’s totally fucking erotic.
- Hear, hear.
Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Flogging, Blowjob, Sex Toys, Spit-roasting
RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #16:  Scent Slave (a touch of magic) - Dom's POV

The MC of this story found that he had an uncanny sexual power - the more semen he accumulates in his sack, the more appealing he would be to others. It's like having strong pheromones and everyone would want a piece of you.

Ever since the MC saw Bryan a fellow gym mate, he was smitten and driven to own him. Hence he started his full cum sackseduction plan. Would Bryan be able to resist the MC's compelling scent? Or would he start begging to be owned and used?

It was sexy in some part but parts of it made me laughed. :P

Story codes/tags: Self Orgasm Denial, Masturbation, Seduction, D/S

RATING: 3 stars


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 STORY #17:  Winner Takes All - Sub's POV

Slave Josh found himself stuffed into a man-size duffle bag, bound and gagged, as a prize to a stranger who has won him for the weekend. His weekend Master was a stern and demanding man. Josh struggled to keep up with his temporary master and trying his best not to let his original master down. However it wasn't an easy task to satisfy Master Max who constantly test Josh's resolves with painful and degrading tasks. Slaveboy Josh has one hell of a weekend to survive. Will he be able to keep his good boy record until he returns to his master?

I got all the right sorts of vibes from this story. Large dominating males towering over their subs. There is so much testosterone in this story alone I could almost smell it in the air. It's like breathing in sexy manly pheromones. Yup this was yet another story with lots of erotic manhandling.

I am glad Slaveboy Josh met Master Max. He brought out the best in Josh. He might be highly dominating and rough but he does have a tender side which I liked very much. In short, Slaveboy Josh had experienced the most intense sessions with Master Max over the weekend. It was painful and harrowing but it was also exhilarating, mind-altering and filled Josh with much joy for Josh. Lastly, I agree with other reviewers that...
Spoiler:
Master Bill was too blind and idiotic to recognize such a slaveboy gem like Josh who is always ready to serve and submit without a complaint. I was kinda expecting or wishing Master Max would sock him a good one when he dumped Josh like trash in public. Too bad I have to do that in my mind since Master Max didn't react the way I wanted. Ahh... pulverizing Master Bill feels so good.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Handjob, Tortures, Sex Toys, Humiliation-Degradation, Flogging, Gangbanging, Quasirapes, Rough Sex, Watersports, Collaring, Dog Slave, Enema


RATING: 5 Hot Stars

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OVERVIEW

The writing has a pronounced masculinity which I found compelling as it highlights virility and that is sexy to me. I am also delighted to learn that there are so many different terms to refer to the male sexual organ other than just cock or penis. I have also learned that different ways of calling a penis evokes different feelings. Words usage are important and it is powerful when used right. Tube-steak and cum sack makes me go wild with desire. So yea the writing is strong and honed to please.

Winner Takes All is erotica done right. It delivers what it promised; it helps its reader to get off. That is what we are looking for in our erotica right? Not only was it well written, it held true power to ignite our sexual desire hence I call this quality erotica.

This anthology is heavy on TPE, domination and submission, sweet sexual torments like orgasm denial, delicious bondage of various kinds, lots of humiliation and degradation, watersports and some corporal punishments. There are a couple of scenes which might freak out some vanilla readers. Otherwise all else is aim to please readers who enjoys serious BDSM that leans more towards the hardcore side.

I have enjoyed this book immensely and had a tough time suppressing my urge to highlight the whole book. If you are those who enjoys getting into the minds of a real dom or sub, this book is definitely for you as it portrays them perfectly. You would find yourself swept away into the minds of the narrators experiencing their realities where every flicker of their emotions are closely felt by you. This book was written with passion and the desire to bring Master/Slave fantasies to life.

One more thing, please try not to skip the Editor's Note or the Foreword. Both was brilliantly written and you would gain insights on what this anthology is about and what it aims to achieve apart from other tidbits.



Sigh... cover love ♥


Publication Date: December 20th, 2011
Publisher: Perfectbound Press
Type: Anthologies (Short Stories), 95,836 words (approximate)
Genre: Gay BDSM Erotica

Description:
The prolific author Christopher Pierce (christopherpierceerotica.com) has appeared in practically every gay magazine and more than three dozen story anthologies. WINNER TAKES ALL, his newest collection, offers the title novella and 16 shorter stories about gay Master/slave relationships, ranging from the edgiest to the most romantic with every variation in between. While only a few stories are set in other times or other worlds than our own, they are all sex fantasies, not slices of life. Their aim is to entertain, which they do splendidly. Advance readers of WINNER TAKES ALL have said that "Masters and slaves pop off the pages like heroic figures from the leather underworld" (Jay Starre) in "lip-smackingly kinky tales" (Jeff Mann) featuring "beautiful language, touching characterization, poignant plotting, and a full-bodied eroticism" (M. Christian, in his Foreword). The stunning original cover images are by Thom Magister, himself a Perfectbound Press author (THE SLAVE JOURNALS AND OTHER TALES OF THE OLD GUARD).


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Wednesday, 12 February 2014

[REVIEW] Maverick's Mate [Brac Pack Manga Book 1] by Lynn Hagen

My rating: 2 of 5 stars
Read from February 11 to 13, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1




2 Stars for the Story Massacre and Mood Killing Effect

I am going to be very frank as usual. Here goes...

The artwork was substandard. It was unrefined and unprofessionally done - typeface too small, non-standardized font size plus bad choice of font type. Besides that, I have also caught a few typos. >_<

I have actually read the novel version of this story and happened to loved it. I have a soft spot for bratty mates with their growly domineering wolves. I am sad to say that this manga has marred the original story and everything I ever held dear in it.

Weak storyline presentation with appalling paneling skill made the story confusing and frustrating to read. On top of that, the dialogue was annoying - it was like kids speech pattern. Another thing that I hated most about it was the way parts of the story was recklessly chopped off which only further the confusion. New readers of this story would undoubtedly be lost and annoyed. I could still follow it all because I have read the novel version of it prior to tackling this manga adaptation.

What about the sex scenes? Well I... cringe a lot during the sex scenes. Nothing erotic or sexy about it. Errr there's much drool exchange too. Ugh.

Yes, I am very disappointed and wouldn't be recommending this manga to anyone especially the manga fans. I hope there will be vast improvement in the next installment of this series. For Lynn Hagen, I would add another star since I loved the original story of hers (not the mutilated version in this manga). I wish I could go beyond that but I am having a hard time finding redeeming features within its pages.

Honestly, I am grateful and happy that the author and publisher of this series has decided to produce a manga adaptation, yet I am disheartened by their selection of an inexperienced manga artist for such an important project. Not only would this compromise the project, it would also reflect badly upon the author's work.


A book cover comparison between the manga and the novel version:
I am quite fond of the novel cover. I liked how Cecil looked.



BOOK DETAILS:

Title: Maverick's Mate Brac Pack Manga Book 1 - Explicit Version
Author: Lynn Hagen
Cover Design: Emma Nicole
Art Design: Nekito-ototo
Publication Date: January 7th, 2014
Publisher: Siren Publishing
Type: Manga
Genre: Yaoi, Boys Love, Gay, Contemporary, Romance, Supernatural/Paranormal Fantasy
Tags/Keywords: wolf shifters, wolf mate, mating, biting, claiming, anal sex, oral sex, possessive lover, domineering loving seme, rebellious uke, bikers, insta-love

Description:
[Siren Everlasting Classic ManLove: Erotic Alternative Paranormal Romance, M/M, werewolves] EXPERIENCE THE START OF LYNN HAGEN'S CLASSIC SERIES IN A WHOLE NEW WAY!

Maverick Brac has formed a pack of his own, naming them the Brac Pack. With fourteen men under him, they all have one thing in common, the preference for men.

Cecil Walter was living a life no one would wish on their enemy in an abusive relationship with his partner with no way out. Getting away from pack problems and a migraine, Maverick indulges in his one secret love, Chai tea. While in the coffee shop trying to forget the world outside exists for five minutes, Maverick has found what he never thought to have, his mate, his very human mate.

Rescuing Cecil from his abusive boyfriend to finding out who in his pack is trying to take Cecil’s life, Maverick has his work cut out for him, but the largest challenge is getting Cecil to come out of his shell and be the man he once was. ** A Siren Erotic Romance.




* Reviewed on February 12th, 2014


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