Recommended for: NO ONE
Read from January 10 to 10, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1
A. Total. Disappointment.
It has the elements I liked...
● Large dominating alpha males. CHECK
● Smaller weaker mate. CHECK
● Mate claiming. CHECK
● Kidnapping. CHECK
Yet it was a total flop because...
● Very poorly written Sex Scenes. CHECK (Odd word choices totally ruined it for me)
● OCC character. CHECK (the too eager and agreeable abductee may have taken mushrooms before his kidnapping or devoid of common sense)
● Lack of plot. CHECK (but I was ready to forgive this as it is almost a given thing with short erotica. I am good as long as they are sexy and gives me the eroticism I sought for)
● Weak writing. CHECK (basic language usage. Some repetitions. Odd word choices)
* Reviewed on January 10th, 2014
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