Friday, 10 January 2014

[REVIEW] Claiming Their Human (Alien Experiment #1) by Eva Evans

Recommended for: NO ONE
Read from January 10 to 10, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1

A. Total. Disappointment.

It has the elements I liked...
Large dominating alpha males. CHECK
Smaller weaker mate. CHECK
Mate claiming. CHECK
Kidnapping. CHECK

Yet it was a total flop because...
Very poorly written Sex Scenes. CHECK (Odd word choices totally ruined it for me)
OCC character. CHECK (the too eager and agreeable abductee may have taken mushrooms before his kidnapping or devoid of common sense)
Lack of plot. CHECK (but I was ready to forgive this as it is almost a given thing with short erotica. I am good as long as they are sexy and gives me the eroticism I sought for)
Weak writing. CHECK (basic language usage. Some repetitions. Odd word choices)

* Reviewed on January 10th, 2014

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